if you were asked to edit this piece of copy: WASHINGTON (March 16) - Valerie Plame put a glamorous face and a personal story to Democrats' criticism of the Bush administration Friday, telling a House committee that White House and State Department officials "carelessly and recklessly" blew her CIA cover in a politically motivated smear of her husband.
Would you find a touch o' sexism in it?
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
1 comment:
And it wasn't just the WaPo. AP, NPR -- NPR's was especially egregious
http://commonsensej.blogspot.com/2007/03/would-we-have-written-shes-troll.html
Great use of a blog for teaching editing. Good luck! -- Doug
Post a Comment